dont just loop the falling scene like that, loop the visual but stretch the audio so it isnt as harsh to the viewer, ever just stop screaming when you fall off a cliff? me neither. other than that watch grammar mistakes when you refer to objects and pronouns, avoid sounding like an eight yeart old. otherwise pretty decent
its pretty good, although i don't understand id the vertical sign to the left are yours or mine either way i dont like them. i would choose i slightly less synthesized song, although techno is a good choice. keep it up!
i only use music by newgrounds artists, i think we should all support eachother on here.
sorry, i don't know what you mean by the vertical sign but that you for the comment :D
its alright but no real objective
its alright but very unoriginal and super childish
Thx for your feedback - any ideas for improvement?
the style is good but it lacks content
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